Well, first, this is very well written! You and your beta did a great job.

I've seen plenty of big bang fics that I couldn't even get through because they were so poorly written and beta'd.

It's not quite as dark as I'd expect Supernatural fic to be, and I think maybe that and it being a het fic is why you're not getting a big response. SPN is a slash fandom.

I think you did a good job, although I think Dean's stomach wound and surgery would have prevented him from being up and around so soon.

I enjoyed it, even tho it was het :D